Kay Kay

Good poem. I really enjoyed reading it and felt the emotion you put in. No crit.

I enjoyed reading it. I thought your sentences were a little short. It doesn't seemed to be really flowing, it's like you are rushing through it, but maybe that was ...

I enjoyed it and was also confused on: i can feel your fear and love tremble everytime i touch your skin Overall good job.

LOL! Nice P.S. Thanks for the crit!

Hey i hate mushrooms too. LOL welcome if i haven't already welcomed you.

Welcome to YWS!!

Thanks Sohini. I hope someday i will finish the puzzle.

Hey welcome back! I don't think we have ever met but welcome back anyways!

Hey welcome to YWS a few days late! Feel free to PM me anytime!

Hey plutogirl! LOL! Well i thought it had a good meaning and i felt the emotion in it. It's kind of how i've been feeling lately. It seems that we're ...

I liked the poem and how it was written. I too like your style. The second to last stanza was my favorite and i really felt the emotion in it. ...

I liked the poem. There were mistakes, yes but overall i think it was written well. My favorite part was: Sometimes, though, I wish things could have been different That ...

Thanks snoik. LOL i didn't think it would make everyone seem like they're in the puzzle. Thanks plutogirl! Yeah i see what you mean by that is how your life ...

I agree on the rhyme part is a little off. I like the message in the poem though.

You should keep writing was good.